For this blog post, I would like you to write a paragraph of no more than 250-300 words that describes your argument and focus for Paper #2. The first sentence of this paragraph should indicate what you are working on, and the second sentence should be your working thesis statement. (Look back to the Sheridan Baker Thesis Machine.) The following sentences should detail how you will analyze examples to make your argument.
This document is meant to help move your work on paper #2 along, and you should not think of this proposal as something that you are bound to. I will give you feedback and you may find that your thinking about your paper will change, perhaps substantially. My comments will focus on the quality of your arguments and be geared toward helping you write the paper as it seems to me in the proposal. While your paper might change, however, at this stage it would be a good idea to choose texts that you know you will write about.
In this paper I will be discussing how David Kurkowski and Murray Schafer both believed sound not only plays an important role in our environment but plays different roles every single day. Kurkowski believed you would be able to identify the importance of a place hold by the sounds that were shared in the space. For example spaces that hold concerts or parties are usually remembered by the songs sang or played. Schafer views sound as a reflection of events that are occurring around us, if an individual is in an excited or sad mood more than likely the music playing will reflect with emotion.